Lauren's+literacy

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This is my roll on the wall, story.

What I would do if I owned Disney Land HongKong

Hi my name is Jordan, I am 14 years old, have long brown air and love dancing and singing. My friends think that I wear really pretty outfits and you should know that I spend nearly all of my time daydreaming. My biggest dream is to own Disney Land Hong Kong.

If I were lucky enough to own Disney Land Hong Kong, there is very little that I would change. One of the things that I would perhaps do isslow down the space mountain roller coaster a little bit so that I could actually smile when they take the photograph of the spaceship. I would also give each person who stood in a queue for more than 10 minutes a free box of popcorn.

To improve Disney Land Hong Kong, I would add Fairytale Land, Lego Land, Crafty Land and Nutcracker Land.

Fairy Tale Land would have fairy shops, a fairy wing ride and a huge fairy statue. There would also be shows and movies with a fairy theme. I would also have fairy parades.

In Lego Land I would have Lego Shops, a Lego tower and pit, and a Lego ride.

In Crafty Land I would have a craft demonstration showing you how to make many things. I would also have a craft shop and a craft room.

Last of all, in Nutcracker Land I would have an ice rink, a show on ice, a ride named the Icy Adventure. All of the characters from the Nutcracker story would walk around the Land.

Would it not be wonderful if all of our dreams came true?

Lauren's Speech

Imagine you were in the middle of war or you were busy being taken to be gassed! Well that's exactly what Adolfo Hitler did. He killed every single jewish person he could find. He killed babies, children, adults and even old people. Did you know that Adolfo Hitler used to have people who would tie one Jew at a time too a wall and then have about twenty people shoot at the person all at once. This is called death by firing squad.

Adolf Hitler was born to his parents Alois Hitler and Maria Anna shicklgruber in Austria on the 20th of April 1889. As he grew up his favorite hobby was art and painting,and he said when he gets older he wanted to be a professional artist.

As Adolf Hitler got older, world war 1 broke out in 1914. Adolf was one of the soldiers on the war front. As the war went on Adolf got gassed, when England dropped a bomb on Germany. He was wounded on his left groin and he was also temporarily blinded for two years. Adolf joined The National Socialist German Workers Party, the Nazi Party in 1919.

In 1921 Adolf Hitler Became the leader of the Nazi Party, this was NOT a good thing for Germany or the rest of the world except for Switzerland because it was a neutral country. You see Adolf wanted more space for Germany because he believed that the Germans were the chosen people. So he started world war 2. You see Adolf only wanted people in Germany to have blond hair and blue eyes because he believed they were the only pure ones. These people were called Aryan's If you look around how many of you would still be alive?

During ww2 Hitler killed over 136 million people and 12 million of those people were Jews. But Adolf had an idea if he instructed people to build concentration camps, well, the soldiers tell the people that they were going for a shower but no they took them to the gas chamber where they kill them with gas. There was more than one concentration camp but the worst one of all was called Auschwitz. Hitler killed 4 million Jews there! It must have been horrible for Jewish people during world war 2.Then on the 30th of April1945 at the age of 56

Imagine you were alive during ww2, it would be horrible. There were many New Zealanders who fort during world war 2 to help defeat Adolf Hitler and we remember these people on Anzac day.

This is my Audio boo media type="custom" key="21247202" Things I think need to work on :

I need to be a little bit louder and I also need to be more expressive when I speak,not like when I am expressive some of the time and not sure for the other part.

Things I think I did well :

I think that I spoke very clearly and that you could understand what I was saying.