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media type="custom" key="21647414" The things i have to work on.Sometimes i skip words that are important. Need to speak louder. The thing i did well. When i miss words i go back and correct my self.

= memoirs pome. =

The Lake was usual enough ; it had a hot pool,a tent,a glow worm,a boat on the lake and some big redwoods that I ride my bike through it.My sisters,my // parents and I do what families do-played on the big slide,searched for my parents,sleeped in the hot cabin,trowed the rugby ball around,listened to the parents talk.Doing nothing important.

= =  Mistery of the missing computer It was a cold fogey winters night and steve had just gone to bed, after going on the computer for 5 hours. He was extremely tired so he had gone to bed 2 hours before his normal bed time.Because every day he goes on the computer 5 hours a day so that means he loves going on the computer. So lets get back to the story, so he has just gone to bed and steve went to sleep as soon as he closed his eyes, at mid night he woke up to a bang on the door he got afrade so he tright to get back to sleep and he did because he was very tired still.When he woke up his dad told him that his laptop was gone he did not believe him so he checked for his self and his dad was right, he was devastated because his computer ment alot to him.He stayed in his room for about 2 hours. when he came out of his room he tryed find out how someone could come in so he searched all around the house he had found that the back door was smashed that's what that baning on one of the doors ."Why did you not go down to see what was happinnig" "i was sceard" that is all right now we need to go to the police no what .Why do you not want the police to go and find it.I want to try find him or her with you ok ya.But i will still go to the police to see the serveillance camera's so we can at lest so we mite get a good look at him or her.That is a good idea.10 minutes later they got to the police station then an another 5 minutes later they had seen the serveillance camera's they had recognised the face it was the next door neighbour but steve had never see thoes people before so it must not be them.then steves dad said not the ones on the right the one on the left oh ,we should really check the right house frist then the left house.So they did, people on the right did not steal the laptop but they still search the house and it was not there so , they called the police just in case they were dangerous,they only had one cop car there so they had to come as well .Te cop car got there as qick as the could when they got to steve's house they told them they could come along only if they keep quit ok now witch house is it the one on the laft ok so we have to go down your driv way and then go up there drive way that is just weard why can we not just jump over the fense,because wwe need stuff ou tof the car oh.so how long will this take abou 2 hours oh that is a long time so we really need to get there qick so should we go now or what ok 2 minutes later they were at the house they knoked in the door no replie so they smashed the door down then someone was in the hall was one of the cops chast him for about 5 minutes he cort him.Ten they quistoned him and it was thase people because this one person told us all of the info and he was the one who stole the laptop. He when to jail for 4 years for theft and robbory

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There are 31 types of this sport.this sport can be played by boys and girls.the 2 main types of this sport are field and ice.these are types of hockey.

Has any one played field hockey well I have.field hockey is played on artificial truff which can be water based or sand based.artificial means fake and not real.the hockey sticks are 'j' shaped and are made out of wood,fibre glass and carbon fibre.field hockey is mostly played in new Zealand,Austria,Europe,Asia and south africa.

Ice hockey is a very dangerous sport where you get knocked down,lose teeth and get hurt.would you like this to happen to you well I would not.did you know that play only stopes when someones knees are touching the ice.unlike field hockey the ball is a puck.the ice in ice hockey is 76.2 mm thick.the sticks are 'L' shaped and are made out of wood and graphite.ice hockey is most popular in Canada,Slovakia,Czech republic,latuia and finland.

The rules of field hockey are stricted and here are some.the ball can not be stopped by hands,feet,legs or any part of the body unless you are the goal keeper.the ball has to go fully past the goal line to be a goal.you must always have a hockey stick,if you drop it or you brake your hockey stick you can not take part in play.dangerous play with the hockey stick such as swinging wildly in a crowed area is a serious offence.if you hit the ball through the air or towards a group of players is anther serious offence.

The lines in field hockey are very important.if you did not have any lines the ball would never go out.there are 1 centre line,2 back lines,2 25 yard lines,2 side lines,2 penalty spots,2 goals and 2 'D' shooting circles.

So now if I asked you there are 31 types,you use a stick and can be played by men and women.

Adams wins gold

Valerie Adams has taken New Zealand's gold medal tally to six after she was awarded gold in the women's Shot Put. Adams' victory was her homeland's sole triumph in the Athletics competition following the disqualification of original winner Nadzeya Ostapchuk after she failed a doping test. The Belarussian athlete tested positive for anabolic agent metenolone during in-competition testing on August 5 and 6 and has been disqualified from the final results. Adams' throw of 20.70m now earns the gold medal, with Russia's Evgeniia Kolodko now taking silver and Lijiao Gong of China elevated to bronze. A statement by the International Olympic Committee released earlier today said: 'The International Olympic Committee (IOC) today announced that it has disqualified, withdrawn the medal from, and excluded Belarus's Nadzeya Ostapchuk (athletics, women's shot put) from the Games of the XXX Olympiad in London.'

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the things that i need to work on.

the 1st thing is that i need to speak louder. the 2nd thing is that i need to speak more slow. the 3rd thing is to get my words out more clearly.

the things that will make this happen is that I will be to read more at night and if i muck up my words i will keep doing it until i get it right.

The things that i did well is :

<span style="background-color: #0044ff; font-family: Tahoma,Geneva,sans-serif; font-size: 200%;">My voice is clear most of the time